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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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0 posted 2008-02-11 10:53 AM


You, couldn't look me in the eye and tell me the reason why

I, just walked away because I didn't want you to see me cry

You, just walked around like I ment nothing at all

I, can't remember how many times you made me fall

You, still live your life happy and have no fear

I, still think of you and when I do it brings me tears

You, haved moved on, making everything last long

I, try my best, just to try and stay strong

You, think of everything and what you're life will bring

I, always use my voice, and everyday I still sing

You, always seem so sure, you always know what to do

I, no matter how hard I want to deny, know that I'm still in love with you

Kate

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voice2bheard
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1 posted 2008-02-11 10:55 AM


This poem is about me and one of my exs who as you can tell I can never forget.

Kate

midnightdreamer
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2 posted 2008-02-11 07:16 PM


great poem.

midnightdreamer


voice2bheard
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3 posted 2008-02-12 01:06 PM


Thank you!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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4 posted 2008-02-12 01:12 PM


Thank you !!

Kate

Mystress May
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5 posted 2008-02-20 11:29 PM


Kate.... I can definately relate to this one.... unfortunately hehe.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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6 posted 2008-03-11 10:55 AM


Thanks Mystress May I know that you are a fan!! Love ya!!

Kate

voice2bheard
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7 posted 2009-12-16 04:25 AM


YEA STILL ABOUT MY BEST FRIEND!! I MUST REALLY LOVE HIM OR SOMETHING? ACTUALLY I SHOULD SAY "DID" HE'S MY BEST FRIEND  HAS BEEN FOR A WHILE NOW

Kate

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