Dark Poetry #4 |
Beautiful liar |
hardcorexflirt Junior Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 12WI, USA |
I was blinded by your smile convinced into your lies you were inside my broken heart and behind my wasteful tears you walked from all my problems and ran with other girls you told me looks are everything but now i know your wrong now i feel that your not worth it i hope that you with see beautiful liar, thats all you are to me i dont ever think youll care of everything i say so i put a fence around my heart just to keep you far away from here i stand away from you thats where ill always be because beautiful liar, thats all you are to me [This message has been edited by hardcorexflirt (01-12-2008 10:59 PM).] |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
As you don't like people to Critique, I shall say this. It's a good poem, there are a few areas but I'll leave at that.. ;-) Nice read. |
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