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KatKali
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since 2008-01-03
Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

0 posted 2008-01-03 07:36 PM


Little Clock, Holder of Time


Little Clock,

Please, have me die,

Little Clock,

For I have nothing to say,

Little Clock, Choker of Time,

Let me die.


© Copyright 2008 Abigail Arnold - All Rights Reserved
dragoon
Junior Member
since 2008-01-09
Posts 19

1 posted 2008-01-12 11:16 AM


Thats depressing, hope you don't feel that way. I like them short little poems though and have yet to try one myself. dragoon
Twilight Warrior
Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106
The World That Never Was
2 posted 2008-01-12 12:35 PM


I like these type of poems as well, though I can't create one. Nice work Kat.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

hardcorexflirt
Junior Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 12
WI, USA
3 posted 2008-01-12 07:45 PM


this is sad but very good...short and effective i love it. somtimes good poems dont need to be long...good work.
surrealpoetics
Junior Member
since 2008-01-13
Posts 13
Spokane, Washington
4 posted 2008-01-13 05:39 PM


...a very interesting prayer...

Je suis de mon coeur le vampire,
— Un de ces grands abandonnés
Au rire éternel condamnés
Et qui ne peuvent plus sourire!
— Charles Baudelaire

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