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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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0 posted 2007-12-19 10:51 AM


I want you to see yourself through my eyes

then you'll know how I feel, why when I see you I cry

I want you to speak the words, I have to say

to understand what I'm going through, with you I'm not okay

I want you to feel, like the way I feel around you

every inch of emotion, every moment is true

If only you could see yourself through my eyes

you'd know how I feel, and then you'd finally recognize

I want you to understand, that I can't let you go

at least not now, theres so much you should know

I felt this way for a long period of time

and everynight I would pray, that you would be mine

I want you to know how I feel

that how I feel for you is real


Kate

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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19
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1 posted 2007-12-19 11:00 AM


This poem is about someone I like alot and saying that I want him to see himself the way I do, and how I feel etc.

Kate

wisdomofthesword
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since 2007-12-17
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the last place on earth
2 posted 2007-12-21 06:54 AM


nice write

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

voice2bheard
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3 posted 2009-12-16 04:55 AM


THANKS! ALWAYS BE TRUE!!

Kate

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