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voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-11-25 01:46 PM

My name is always the same

but to many I always seem to change

the taste of your lips was so sweet

your eyes always followed me in shadows

the touch of the wind, sand blows in my eye

and I'm always out of reach no matter how hard you try

I can always tell when you're back again

in the sunset meadows where your smile never ends

its a place where people can go to be alone

but you don't have to worry youre not on your own

the sunset meadows can only been seen

when you trust yourself and everyone in between

of course everyone in their life has told a lie

but have you ever done it to make others cry

when you're all alone and on you're own

cry out "Sunset meadows" and you'll be home

It may not be a place on earth

but to some its heaven, a new place, rebirth

theres never such thing as perfect

but being there, trust me its worth it.

Kate

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-11-25 01:50 PM

This poem is about trying to find somewhere where you can be yourself and have no worries at all. Pretty much like a worry free place.

Kate

pen&paper
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since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2007-11-27 10:23 PM

I absolutely loved this! You have no idea how much I needed to hear this. Definately going in my library and I'll be sure to tell pencil&paper to read this too. ♥

Rerra Leigh

voice2bheard
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since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-11-28 10:52 AM

Thank you so much!! I loved it to of course and I wrote this poem for everyone who going through feelings like this which I'm sure has happend at least once in their life your welcome!!

Kate

littlefairy
Member

since 2007-08-06

Posts 51
New York

4 posted 2007-11-29 04:57 PM

It was good i enjoyed it. I hope you had found your Sunset Meadows.

I’m good during the day. But at night I wait.I wait for the one who’ll never return.

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

5 posted 2007-12-02 07:02 PM

Well the sunset meadows isn't a real place its supppose to be a place to find yourself to relax bring everything together in other words imagination

Kate

PoetsPlay
Member

since 2007-12-22

Posts 56
California

6 posted 2007-12-22 08:15 AM

That is a wonderful poem! I love all of your other ones, too. You are going to be the first person in my library! "When you're all alone and on you're own"-the second "you're" should be a your.

Alexandra

Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

7 posted 2007-12-25 01:47 PM

WOnderful!! I really like it and glad that I was able to read something as beautiful..

Thank you!

Tears of Sanity~

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

8 posted 2009-12-16 04:55 AM

OF COURSE THERE'S NO SUCH THING AS THE SUNSET MEADOWS BUT EVERYONE HAS THERE OWN HAPPY PLACE AND THIS WAS MINE

Kate

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