Dark Poetry #4 |
Make your moment last |
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
They looked in your eyes They told you goodbye but is that really all you had to say? You wanted something more, to be okay when you saw them driving down the road think about it, did your time together feel like gold? You think back to all the happy memories, football games, soccer practice, hanging out til after three all the friends that they had over told them to settle down over your shoulder everytime when they went out somewhere you said don't be late, I'll be waiting right there now all those times are coming to an end but when there children are grown they'll be saying the same things over again So treasure the times you have left with the ones you love Don't blink, because sooner than you know it,they'll be just like you So spend as much time with them as you can ask them what they want to do time flies by and of course we cry but make every moment last because before you know it, you're time has passed Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
This poem is about a parent seeing their child live their life and realizing that they've grown up so fast and that they should spend as much time as they can with their children. Kate |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Your words are so perfect.... it is apparent that they are from experience and not reaching for something from nothing. Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Of course really its about telling yourself that you can't take your life for granted to do what you want live your life to the fullest Kate |
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PoetsPlay Member
since 2007-12-22
Posts 56California |
It sounds as the end of a golden age is at hand, but really it is just beginning. Even though we get older, we are still able to get closer to people, it doesn't really mean goodbye. Alexandra |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you thats a point Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
YEA YOU NEED TO MAKE YOUR MOMENTS LAST!! OF COURSE!! Kate |
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