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voice2bheard
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0 posted 2007-11-25 12:11 PM


They looked in your eyes

They told you goodbye

but is that really all you had to say?

You wanted something more, to be okay

when you saw them driving down the road

think about it, did your time together feel like gold?

You think back to all the happy memories,

football games, soccer practice, hanging out til after three

all the friends that they had over

told them to settle down over your shoulder

everytime when they went out somewhere

you said don't be late, I'll be waiting right there

now all those times are coming to an end

but when there children are grown they'll be saying the same things over again

So treasure the times you have left with the ones you love

Don't blink, because sooner than you know it,they'll be just like you

So spend as much time with them as you can ask them what they want to do

time flies by

and of course we cry

but make every moment last

because before you know it, you're time has passed

Kate

© Copyright 2007 Kate - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
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1 posted 2007-11-25 12:13 PM


This poem is about a parent seeing their child live their life and realizing that they've grown up so fast and that they should spend as much time as they can with their children.

Kate

Mystress May
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2 posted 2007-12-03 02:32 AM


Your words are so perfect.... it is apparent that they are from experience and not reaching for something from nothing.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
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3 posted 2007-12-04 10:39 AM


Of course really its about telling yourself that you can't take your life for granted to do what you want live your life to the fullest

Kate

PoetsPlay
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4 posted 2007-12-22 07:29 AM


It sounds as the end of a golden age is at hand, but really it is just beginning. Even though we get older, we are still able to get closer to people, it doesn't really mean goodbye.

Alexandra

voice2bheard
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5 posted 2008-01-02 10:53 AM


Thank you thats a point

Kate

voice2bheard
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6 posted 2009-12-16 04:54 AM


YEA YOU NEED TO MAKE YOUR MOMENTS LAST!! OF COURSE!!

Kate

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