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Dark Poetry #4

Sorrow sins

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-12-13 01:31 PM

A voice that lies deep within

saved me from my sorrow sins

the light that shined from up above

gave someone hope, that they will be loved

to cry the tears that left you alone

someone cries out softly I want to go home

to have one last look, feeling or touch

through all the times, never enough

an indescribeable feeling you felt

when only you and noone else

to just go on and leave everything behind

its nothing you won't feel through your mind

so as I leave and cry within

save me from my sorrow sins

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-12-14 11:09 AM

This poem is about letting go trying to move on

Kate

wisdomofthesword
Member

since 2007-12-17

Posts 224
the last place on earth

2 posted 2007-12-18 02:01 AM

the meanings subtle yet clear at the same I love it

something thats stupid but works isn't stupid

fromme2U
Member

since 2007-11-09

Posts 257

3 posted 2007-12-18 06:51 PM

I can sooo relate. nice write

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2007-12-20 10:31 AM

thank you very much

Kate

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

5 posted 2009-12-16 04:56 AM

I DO STILL LOVE THIS POEM!!

Kate

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