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Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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Taunton, MA

0 posted 2007-11-22 06:13 PM



****This isn't much... it's one of those things that you write on a scrap of paper while driving so you don't lose it but for some reason you can't get it out of your head. I haven't the heart to change it or add to it****

had a thought but it was wrong
still thought this thought
wished it was strong
hung onto my thought
hoping it was real
but the thought is a thought
and thoughts can't feel.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

© Copyright 2007 Amanda M. Stonis - All Rights Reserved
Seeker72
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since 2007-02-24
Posts 387
Oregon USA
1 posted 2007-11-25 01:32 AM


"but the thought is a thought
and thoughts can't feel."

So true.

Quality poem... my Mistress.

;-)

[This message has been edited by Nan (11-25-2007 08:13 PM).]

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25
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Taunton, MA
2 posted 2007-11-25 09:16 AM


You're a doll, seeker!


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