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Empty and bitter
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Empty and bitter |
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E'Val New Member
since 2007-11-21
Posts 2 |
Empty and bitter I dare not move a step I know I have no choice, but to live Though I'd rather give up and take my rest Because life is so complicated With all its ups and downs I'm tired of seeing smiles While only being able to frown, Because nothing ever seems to go my way Resistance meets me pound for pound So how with concrete shoes am I not to drown? Or is this supposed to be some test? A right of passage if you like, Where the answers will be given that I've sought all my life Or am I to find the same emptiness that I've always found Within this world of man, void of hallowed ground. 'Cause I say I cannot take it If what I guess is true You see I've always aimed to win, But all I ever do is lose. So how can I believe your divine words today? When they'll only bring me heartbreak tomorrow Is it not better to live in the world I know? The one of bitterness and sorrow Rather then be torn apart by the love of lovers Come the 'morrow. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
'So how with concrete shoes am I not to drown' That is one of those lines that just connects like few can. Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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Virtual Abyss Member
since 2008-04-09
Posts 52East Coast - USA |
E'Val, Well put and further supports my agnostic views. Prove to me and I'll follow but what have ya done for me lately (or ever)? Go SOX! V/r, Virtual Abyss |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
i love it! thats how i feel summed up in a nutshell.... |
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midnightdreamer Member
since 2008-02-03
Posts 309Roy,ut |
this is how feel sometimes. nice poem though! midnightdreamer |
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