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Ocean Vuong
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 37
NYC

0 posted 2008-03-29 12:29 PM

This road that curls at your heart
paved with mysteries
and the lucid drops of dreams
drip on my palms, cracked
with the lines of an ancient map.

This cannot be any harder
for your stars are white and mine,
forever black. They orbit one another
coming so close I feel your light
kiss my neck, we never touch.

Now the moon drips on this skyline
exposing your palace in the clouds
just a light-year away.
Still, I am far too human to fly
and we never touch.

Stranded with these streets, a particle
in this great combustion, you’re simply
too high above and I'm
yet to be found. With the wings
on my shoulders clipped, I walk

hoping to fall off this earth
where you can catch me, if you want.

JenniferMaxwell

Member Elite

since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

1 posted 2008-03-29 01:27 PM

Welcome to PIP! Hope you enjoy your stay and honor us with more of your lovely poetry.

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

2 posted 2008-03-29 03:05 PM

i love this... i do

i absolutely LOVE this!
WOW!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2008-03-29 04:40 PM

OceanVuong~

This is absolutely beautiful~
Welcome to the land of PiP~
I will personally love reading more of you~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

Ocean Vuong
Junior Member

since 2008-03-29

Posts 37
NYC

4 posted 2008-03-29 05:34 PM

Thank you guys,
I have been skimming the net for a while to find a decent yet respectable place to share my work, my search has ended. I look forward on enjoying everyones work.

Thank you for the warm welcome,

cheers to all!

-ocean

Yoinn
Senior Member

since 2007-08-16

Posts 649
Michigan

5 posted 2008-03-29 05:58 PM

Yes sir...thats poetry right there....loved it

Yoin

Larrysmom
Senior Member

since 2008-04-03

Posts 533
Florida, USA

6 posted 2008-04-06 11:47 PM

I really feel it is worth it, so I am complimenting it…

It is a beautiful write and it takes me high into a midnight space where I reach out and beg to hold, one last time, a beautiful soul that is no longer on my plane of existence…

Thank you for sharing this…

Tammy<333

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

7 posted 2008-04-18 09:46 PM

sad but amazingly great!

midnightdreamer

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