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the amazing emo kid
New Member

since 2007-05-23

Posts 6
South Carolina

0 posted 2008-03-19 08:13 PM

Fight (All For You)

I'll go through hell

I'll fight the tide

I'll run to you

I'll stand my ground

This is all for you

I'll bleed for you

and still need for you

I'll cry for you

and ill take that chance.............

and die for you

All for you

I'll go through hell

I'll fight the tide

I'll run to you

I'll stand my ground

This is all for you

I'll fight for you

and take flight for you

I'll scream for you

and fall asleep...........

just to dream of you

All this and more for you

Andrew M. Osborne

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

1 posted 2008-03-21 11:37 AM

nice poem. emo kid! its pretty good for your first post!

although this poem isn't that dark as i'd thought it would be..

just a little advise. be careful on what you write about and where you post it. Cause i got some of my poems taken off here cause i wrote about a very bad subject and posted its in the wrong forum.... so yea

its just a little advise.

Have a nice day!!

XxZachxX

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

2 posted 2008-03-23 10:18 AM

#2 was more meaningful to this reader...much more thought-provoking...hide this one in the attic...if you marry the individual, dig it out and show it to them someday...love poems help to ease the pain of growing...even when the love is for self, a deity or another living thing.

[This message has been edited by r v wooo (03-23-2008 12:42 PM).]

hiddensmiles
Senior Member

since 2008-02-07

Posts 514
at the beach... i wish

3 posted 2008-04-04 01:03 AM

welcome here!! lol that was late, good write

JJ

jody5
Senior Member

since 2005-12-21

Posts 876
California, U.S.A.

4 posted 2008-04-04 10:38 PM

Welcome, I thought it was a great write.

Reborn
Junior Member

since 2008-04-01

Posts 13

5 posted 2008-04-05 03:41 AM

Well done

AAB
Member

since 2008-04-10

Posts 99
Canada

6 posted 2008-04-10 10:34 PM

I liked the ending lines the best, but ist was all good

midnightdreamer
Member

since 2008-02-03

Posts 309
Roy,ut

7 posted 2008-04-18 09:42 PM

nice write!!
midnightdreamer

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