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Wishful Thinking'
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Wishful Thinking' |
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trUstNooNe Member
since 2006-05-21
Posts 91 |
It's hard to be so far away. But I think it's think it's tougher to be closer. I want to take you all in my arms, but yet at the same time I want my own space. I'm not sure why but I can't decide where I take my stand. Somethings are to hard to deal with, and some places are hard to go to, and Somethings are just to hard to talk about. I don't know why everything happened the way it did. I sure wish it all turned out a different way. What I imagined is not much my life today. I'll trade tears for laughter, and sorrow for joy any day. If I could I'd change alot of things. ......I bet we all would....... |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Well doll.... I feel what you're saying! The third line just doesn't fit.... seems too long. Your words are from the heart and I think that you could do a lot with them. Raw emotion is the beginning. I am definately not the greatest poet in the world but I'm honest and opinionated and always willing to voice what I think. Feel free to IM me on yahoo: mystress_may Our scars are the foundation for what we have become |
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