Dark Poetry #4 |
Abstruse |
voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
You walk by, I always see you in the hall We never say anything to each other not even once, never at all Its hard to say you were someone I know but that was what happend, so long ago now you've moved on, I'm never in your mind but to me you're always there, all the time you're someone that I can never stop thinking about no matter how many times I tried to let it out I guess its been so long and don't know what to do I can't believe what I'm about to say I'm still in love with you |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
This poem is about a guy I know and still happen to be in love with him after 3 years, but we never talk anymore whatsoever. I still think about him even though I don't want to. |
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Prudy Junior Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 13the prison inside me |
I am going through this right know with this girl I like. A lot like I am going through. Also read your other poem it's the same thing with me. I just felt that I was dead inside although my body was alive. In fact I wrote a poem called Prison in my soul dealing with it. Check it out if you want to. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
thanks its nice to know that theres someone out there who knows what I'm going through. Don't worry I'll check out some of your poems too. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
well nice to know someone agrees, so thanks, nice to have someone appreciate my work. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
hey doll... I've been reading your poems... it looks like you're going through a tough time. It's something I've been through and it has helped me develop a shell... kind of like how a scar helps thicken the skin and makes us tougher. I'm sorry you're experiencing such pain but I do wish you the easiest way through it. |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
Thank you, you know I'm really starting to like you alot, you've been helping me out alot! Kate |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
PRETTY MUCH BEING INVISIBLE Kate |
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