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Dark Poetry #4

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voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

0 posted 2007-10-31 09:28 AM

The woods are quiet, pretty lonely too

Until someone goes there, then theres something to do

two people happen to go there, on a sunny day

they look at each other with nothing to say

a simple smile is all it takes

they both open up, finally awake

they get closer and closer, til nothing else is in view

one says to the other " Its just us two"

they're holding hands, and then they see each others breath in clear view

He starts to touch her, she knows what he wants to do

and as their lips touch, both of them know

they didn't want to stop, never wanted to let go

their hands slowly start to fade away

for they both wanted each other to stay

" I guess this is goodbye, I'll see you again"

and never did they speak another word to each other, for that was the end of them being friends

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

1 posted 2007-10-31 10:42 AM

This poem is really personal to me because this poem is something that actually happend to me in real life, pretty much every detail has happend. There was this person I was dating and I loved him and I still do even though we never talk anymore. I miss him so much, but I know that he doesn't think about me, what do you think I should do??

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2007-10-31 01:34 PM

That was well written....

as far as what to do.... you can't force some things... you just have to move forward with your life.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

3 posted 2007-11-01 01:12 PM

thank you nice to know someone actually likes my work well besides my english teachers (lol)

voice2bheard
Senior Member

since 2007-10-19

Posts 591
New York

4 posted 2009-12-16 05:17 AM

WOW!! AN EX MOMENT!! *(WELL IT WAS WRITTEN WHILE WE WERE STILL DATING)

Kate

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