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Prudy
Junior Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 13
the prison inside me
0 posted 2007-10-30 11:57 PM

My heart was systematically destoyed,
Every word you said to me,
Every last sound slowly rent apart every fiber,
Every last fleshy strip that is my heart.

Now there is nothing left,
There is no next day,
Tomorrow will never come
For I am destroyed today.
© Copyright 2007 Rodolfo Cavalcanti - All Rights Reserved
voice2bheard
Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591
New York
1 posted 2007-10-31 10:44 AM

Wow thats exactly how I feel about one of my previous relationships
Mystress May
Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296
Taunton, MA
2 posted 2007-11-04 12:59 PM

Prudy... I feel as though I am always left hanging.... I want more! You give me just part of something. Give me more!
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