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Prudy Junior Member
since 2007-10-22
Posts 13the prison inside me |
Don't you hate me? I hate myself, I am wicked, cowardly, weak, and… I hate me, but... I am nothing but me, I am me, I wish to be me. If you could be me… Save…Me. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Not sure what to say really... |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I like it. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Prudy... I honestly think that if you did more, you could be amazing. Your words seem like small parts of something bigger. I feel like I'm being left hanging whenever I read somthing of yours. The fact that I feel that is good.... because I want to read more. But I feel gyped (sp?) because I know there is more to it! Like eating cake without frosting. Does that make sense? |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
Some cakes taste better without frosting though MM. ;-) |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
haha you're right seeker. I'm just greedy and if I like something, I always want more! I really do have that feeling that I'm reading just an excerpt from something bigger, though. |
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Seeker72 Member
since 2007-02-24
Posts 387Oregon USA |
I know exactly what you mean. Almost as if someone had cut the page in half, leaving you with a handfull of emotion instead of the whole bucket. That was a very weird way of explaining it but i hope you know what I mean. |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
lol that's actually a perfect way of describing it! |
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