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carolinabeen Member
since 2006-12-12
Posts 69 |
CNn what if i told you the hills were on fire what if i asked you to leave what if i told you the marsh was a lake would it take what if for one time you thought what if for one time you forgot what if i told you it was a joke would you choke what if i could plant in your minds what if i could land mine what if it has would you stand what if i swore life would end what if i tore you a bend what if i slammed a pretty one would you pawn I like it better your way J.L. Koehler |
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voice2bheard Senior Member
since 2007-10-19
Posts 591New York |
I like your poem then again I don't whats it about? |
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Purity Senior Member
since 2001-11-20
Posts 526Once Upon, USA |
My way? LOL... Ain't seen nothin' for my journey yet... Wanna kick in th' pants? See how Hollow brought back to life two poems...one of mine and one from eve... Is there still an eternal mark upon my soul? Hey, friend... all punny jestures aside, good write! Me Wings bruised from turning away in such confined space...Not broken...still healable...still feathered with life, somewhere |
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