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JenniferMaxwell

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since 2006-09-14

Posts 2423

0 posted 2007-10-10 09:15 AM

I’d almost forgotten
the colour of rain,
how cold the snow
when winter remains
as the departure
of a midnight train
that rushes past wheat fields
in the untouchable gold
and shadows of moonlight,
through subterranean
caverns deep in the solitude
of a journey without end,
over trestles suspended
in unbreathable air
high above the reverie
of what might have been.

[This message has been edited by JenniferMaxwell (10-10-2007 12:46 PM).]

taramw
Senior Member

since 2000-06-08

Posts 738

1 posted 2007-10-11 09:00 AM

I loved the words "I’d almost forgotten
the colour of rain" and "of a journey without end, over trestles suspended
in unbreathable air"

Hmmm... how poignant these are! And what an image your words conjure!!!! Well done

It's better to be a lion for a day than a sheep all your life.
-- Sister Elizabeth Kenny

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