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flesh mechanic
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since 2007-07-27
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puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states)

0 posted 2007-08-06 11:51 AM


Infidelity boost and,
I noticed she were loosend.
She killed our truce and,
She's licking torn fuses.
And she still confuses,
All eleven muses.
Dont feel bad she chooses,
To connect her bruises, oh those pathetic bruises.

She keeps reaching, for this feeling
Its just bleaching, and she'll start peeling.

She should of knew that,
If theres stress i'll reduce it.
Bubblegum vs cigarettes,
She still acts she's eleven.

Eleven clocks in her head, none of them will tick,
Her heads too loud.
Infidelity drips,drips from her lips,
And she could never touch me now.

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BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 461
Come find me?
1 posted 2007-08-06 10:28 PM


"And she could never touch me now"

I really liked this line for some reason...Nice poem

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

flesh mechanic
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since 2007-07-27
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puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states)
2 posted 2007-08-07 10:17 AM


thank you for reading it.
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