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Dark Poetry #4

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blue face
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

0 posted 2007-08-05 01:37 PM

I lost my innocence somelong ago
My happiness fading away,
I stepped blinded into darkness
only to find that it was life.
I walk into a crowed of friends
only to feel more alone than ever.
As I fade away into the cold background
that was once known as home.

[This message has been edited by blue face (08-05-2007 05:32 PM).]

BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

1 posted 2007-08-05 04:42 PM

"I walk into a crowed of fiends
only to feel more alone than ever"

I really liked this line. I've felt this so many times...nice poem

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

2 posted 2007-08-06 01:37 PM

yes, I've been here. I love how you made the feelings in your head flow so well on paper. If you even need someone to talk to, just email me...
Krysti.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

3 posted 2007-08-07 10:02 AM

thanks guys!

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