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Dark Poetry #4

Ice Drain

green_itchy_stuff
Senior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 1929
New Caney, Tx

0 posted 2008-02-21 12:12 PM

Crooked maddness hostility
Love compassion detonate
Misery lunch casket
Happy happy jot stars
Break my arm
Feed my soul
Chaos deliverer
Jesus conceived

Jesus please
Please Jesus
Jesus praise
Please Jesus
Praise Jesus

Cut me
Break me
Skeleton seed
My vine has green leaves
Dead leaves became green
After I wiped myself clean
Yet it is they and them that deceives

Invisible knife
Deep penetration
Into the throat
Make believe
Decapitation
Wait,
That was real

KatKali
Member

since 2008-01-03

Posts 67
Where the wispers grow louder

1 posted 2008-02-21 06:32 PM

Wow, what else do you say to that, I loved it really, I kinda got lost, I got lost in that feeling I got from it... Very Good Job.

Dark,
What does that mean?
Light,
What makes you so good?
Sin,
What is my Sin?
Only when you answer the first two will
you find the last.

Mystress May
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

2 posted 2008-02-21 11:10 PM

Craig.... I enjoy your style and this has great flow.

Our scars are the foundation for what we have become

megaskull
Junior Member

since 2008-02-04

Posts 11

3 posted 2008-02-22 05:57 AM

Yeah I have to agree, this is a very cool piece and writing style. good good.

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