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greysolace Member
since 2006-03-27
Posts 71 |
Standing before the relentless crowd Naked Fears and weaknesses exposed for all to see Flaws magnified to excruciating degrees Nowhere to hide Your mask lying broken at your feet Wanting nothing more than to turn and weep To flee from reality Inadequacy sinking in As you wait for this judgment to finally end And yet they gaze on Wondering if dreams and hopes can ever mend Feeling more vulnerable than you can comprehend And yet they gaze on Bowing your head to escape the stares But painfully aware that they’ll always be there Because you let them Burrowing deep within your soul To hide a part that they’ll never know Keeping it from them But now unable to save yourself ~~Poetry is written emotion~~ |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I really liked this. It was very deep  Nicely done.So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
Good write that clearly voices how it feels to be vulnerable. |
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flesh mechanic Member
since 2007-07-27
Posts 67puyallup, wa (the black hole of the states) |
wow this poem is quite breath taking. i love the part, "Flaws magnified to excruciating degrees Nowhere to hide Your mask lying broken at your feet" it put so much imagery in the readers head. |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
I enjoyed this so much. It was beautiful. |
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