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andrey Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29 |
Thinking while I'm sleepless Then writing it down Reading the beggining Then waiting for the sound ---------------------------- My last step - oblivion Except for my eyes They'll remember the colour Their hate and their size Thinking while I'm dying They say I'm losing my mind "You know that they're just lying" He assures me from inside Wishing for a minute Wishing for a dream Take me to that place again Give me my last scream Staring at the ceiling Taking my last look Tears are falling down my cheek For everything they took I'm much too young to see How my world is fading out But I still hear them whisper "I sure want him out" I close my tired eyes Last thought at those rats Thinking at her, hold my breath Before dying in regrets They say, a thought, a silent prayer To God, a soul could save But I'm not praying, I'm still standing As I spit on my own grave |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
wow I loved the flow and meaning of this poem. hope to read more. sarah |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow I really liked the flow of this. hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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luvnh8rbalanced New Member
since 2007-06-26
Posts 6 |
that was really good, the flow was awesome, it weas really deep. |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
Wow! I loved the emotion in this  It was very moving. Nice write!!So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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