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JenniferMaxwell
since 2006-09-14
Posts 2423 |
satanic verses in plathian gobbledygoo from a jerusalem ass a beast with two voices all kitted out in daddy's jackboots mindless as a palm frond achooing excuses for the rack and the screw hosanna hosanna the language obscene from the lips of a panzer-man baptizing his corpses in beslen-like streams drill holes in the eyes of all those who displeased the merciless fascist with the movable feast celebrated by sycophants too blind to see the candle’s blown out and the deceiver lies in pathological darkness flesh born from ashes worm-holed through and through the son of a father 'brute heart of a brute' |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
Ok Um I didn't really get it can you explain it. Hope to read more. Sarah |
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beautyincalvary Member
since 2006-07-13
Posts 98 |
I really do like this, but I as well am having trouble figuring it out. And I understand why you have so many allusions and metaphors and such, as I tend to do that too, but perhaps some more hints? I think it has something to do with religion and/or following a leader just because you're told to? I could be off but this type of ambiguous poem is my favorite. |
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