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Kira Aso
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Closer to Hell...

0 posted 2007-06-30 10:54 PM



Madder, Madder, than I ever was
More insane just because
No one can see all that’s going on
Inside my head
Nobody wants to know
The direction that my thoughts flow
Misery and madness go hand in hand
Time slipping through my fingers
Like dry sand
Words that cut deeper than any knife
Each one chipping away
Each one ending my life
Forcing me to go insane
Can’t handle all the strain...

Madder, Madder than I ever was
More insane just because

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

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1 posted 2007-07-05 05:38 PM


ahhh yes another one of your poems I can realte to I love this Kira
luv from
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

blue face
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since 2007-06-03
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2 posted 2007-07-10 10:36 AM


this is great
I love your poems they're so truth
hope to read more

sarah.


BrittanyJ
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since 2007-06-03
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Come find me?
3 posted 2007-07-14 02:04 PM


Wow...it was very deep I liked being able to feel what i was reading. Very nice poem!!

So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart.

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