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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-07-05 05:54 PM

I was walking on a dead end street,
when I saw the devil at my feet,
we laughed and shared a few smiles,
and kept walking on for many miles,

He stopped at a gate and told me to follow,
It smelled of death, I tried hard to swallow
I took one step forward and went inside,
I should've put up resistance, I should've tried,

Now he has me I don't know what to do,
turn the other cheek before he finds you,
he searches for people lost in this place,
you'll know he has you by the look on his face,

so walk away before it pulls you in,
before you become encased in sin,
just say no and walk away,
so you can live another day.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Alaina
Member

since 2007-06-16

Posts 106

1 posted 2007-07-05 08:18 PM

another amazing one. loved this too, definitely one of my favorites that i've read.

I know you'll be a sun in somebody else's sky, but why can't it be mine?
-Eddie Vedder

BrittanyJ
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 461
Come find me?

2 posted 2007-07-06 12:44 PM

Wow!! I really liked it hunnie!! It reminded me of another one i think you wrote...a while ago

Please excuse me, my heart is bleeding.

blue face
Member

since 2007-06-03

Posts 92

3 posted 2007-07-06 06:44 PM

wow another great poem
nice write
and hope to read more

sarah

comoloco7
Junior Member

since 2007-09-21

Posts 31
MA

4 posted 2007-09-29 09:11 PM

it seems to me that you are trying to warn us, trying to show us away from the path that you've taken. I really enjoy your work.

In the blood soaked battle field, bleach the bones of countless millions who in the midst of victory stopped to rest, and resting they died.

moondogz
Member

since 2007-05-01

Posts 397
Great White North

5 posted 2007-09-29 09:48 PM

hunnie_girl, very well done, yes "Ye Olde Devil" is a trickster.
moon.

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

6 posted 2007-10-04 02:34 PM

All could do well to heed the warning. Hunnie you are such an amazing writer and I hope you continue to grow.

Abbeon.

trUstNooNe
Member

since 2006-05-21

Posts 91

7 posted 2007-10-04 08:25 PM

i like it...thats actually something i needed to hear

Seeker72
Member

since 2007-02-24

Posts 387
Oregon USA

8 posted 2007-10-04 09:58 PM

Very cool.

It reminded me of Meeting a man upon a Stair.

Loved it.

Tears-of-Sanity
Member

since 2007-09-05

Posts 121
Kingdom Hearts

9 posted 2007-10-08 01:12 AM

Very nice and meaningful.
I like it a lot

Tears of Sanity~

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