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Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member
since 2007-08-31
Posts 42
Arkansas

0 posted 2007-09-25 11:53 AM



Tonight,
I watch the moon's light
slowly crawl across my bedroom
I am sitting here alone
No companion no love
I hear a dog barking in the alley
I get a chill all over my body
I am afraid but lonely
The two most complicated emotions
Why?
Why most i feel this way?
Why me?
I don't know or i don't understand
Sitting in the darkness
Gives me some feeling of comfort
Or security
No one can see me
How i feel i am hidden
And so are my emotions
My loneliness
I am no longer afraid
Afraid of what
Afraid of the answer
Maybe
I am alone not afraid
Maybe this is how life should be
No problems no obligations
Only one person to worry about
Yourself being alone

© Copyright 2007 Mia Oslund - All Rights Reserved
Abbeon
Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
1 posted 2007-09-26 12:40 PM


The darkness doth change and warpe an alone soul.

i like the theme, the style, and the writting so you have a gold star from me.

Thanks-Abbeon

Ethan Halo
Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793
on the roof again
2 posted 2007-10-09 04:31 AM


i got used to being alone when i became comfortable with the idea that yourself is the only one that will be there for you to count on for the rest of your life.

it's certainly not a fun journey to lie in the dark and face yourself down.
but know that you're not the first one to do it.
you're not as alone as you might think.  

good luck, and i enjoyed the haunting rhythm in this... like creeping around and empty house to realize in the end you are alone... and that you just have to deal.

The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite.

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