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Alaina
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since 2007-06-16
Posts 106


0 posted 2007-06-16 11:30 PM



Listen to my mind
As I think about
How we just made eye contact.
There was no one else there
besides the two of us.

Listen as our
heartbeats become one.
Our breath floats out
in unison.

Listen as our
screams become a little bit louder.
The anger keeps
growing and growing.

Listen as we both
just can't deal with it
anymore.
Our lips meet for the last time,
and I shut the door,
cutting off the wire
that once connected our hearts.

© Copyright 2007 Alaina - All Rights Reserved
Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12
Posts 96
Johannesburg
1 posted 2007-06-18 05:55 AM


Very well written, i take my hat off to u ~~~{@

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

blue face
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since 2007-06-03
Posts 92

2 posted 2007-06-18 11:52 AM


Nicly put
hope to read more

Sarah


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since 2006-06-18
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3 posted 2007-06-19 06:05 PM


ahh nice to see you in dark been away for so long. I really liked this.
hunnie.

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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