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andrey Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29 |
Oh my angel What they've done? They cut your wings Burned... they're gone Left you bleeding On the ground Crying, shouting Oh.. the sound No one's hearing All alone Hoping, thinking To the unknown In the dirt Is where you'll die Drowned in blood Til last breath you'll cry Drowned in blood The wings are burned An angle just died But who's concerned? |
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ladylisa Member
since 2007-04-29
Posts 342Florida USA |
This is a beautiful poem. |
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Xeonox
since 2000-04-01
Posts 1764CA, USA |
Awesome right. Short and sweet. I speak insanity. I write fantasy. I sleep reality. |
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blue face Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 92 |
short but very heart felt hope to read more. sarah |
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BrittanyJ Member
since 2007-06-03
Posts 461Come find me? |
I know you wrote this a while ago, but i just read it  So, i really liked it!! It was kinda sad...Very well written!! So no more hiding all your pain, you deserve a new start. That's why i'm closing myself away, this is a message from your heart. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
wow this was straight to the heart loved this hunnie. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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littlefairy Member
since 2007-08-06
Posts 51New York |
I enjoyed this alot it made me smile. I had once had someone who called me angel and i had felt exactly like your poem says till someone picked me up and made me live again. Very good. -Tara |
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andrey Junior Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 29 |
Thank you all for your kind words! It's kinda weird for me as I don't have this one in my favorite list at all.. Anyways, thanks again.. |
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