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Sir_Vampire
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since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

0 posted 2008-02-18 07:42 AM

broken battered and bruised
now I see how I am used
do what you must to appease you hate
I love you and am ready to accept my fate

If my death will please you, kill me
If my tears calm you, make them flow
If my bruises make you smile, hit me
If you want to be alone, make me go

But I beg of you, take me into your embrace,
Even just once, please just show me a trace
Of the love that once was…
The love that was us…

I love you and always will no matter what
Even when you scream to keep my mouth shut
For I am yours my love and yours alone
And will always call your malicious arms home

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

r v wooo
Senior Member

since 2007-08-07

Posts 656

1 posted 2008-02-18 12:06 PM

sir v...have you ever thought about a change..."fresh meat", so to speak! your poem and the poem i read by mystress may leads me to believe the two of you may have something in common.

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

2 posted 2008-02-18 03:58 PM

hmmmmm this one is a different one. the topic left me in shock but the rhymeing and everything is good. but may i as a question... Why would you want to write about a subject like this? Did this acctually happen to you?!?!

~Zach~

"Nice guys finish last"

LynnFromCT
Member

since 2008-02-18

Posts 53
CT, USA

3 posted 2008-02-18 08:27 PM

i lived a life of constant verbal, sexual and physical abuse - to the point where I believed I deserved this behavior. But one day, I had faith in myself, and I left with only the clothes on my back... PLEASE LEAVE THIS RELATIONSHIP.

The abuser will never stop, and the longer you allow the abuse to continue, the worse it will get.

Please get out when you can.

If you need a friend to talk to, look me up.

Sir_Vampire
Member

since 2007-06-12

Posts 96
Johannesburg

4 posted 2008-02-19 12:42 PM

i actually wrote this poem so my friend would open her eyes and actually see how badly her boyfriend treats, and by what i hear she read it and did open her eyes

you watched me bleed you watched me die you watched me not even a bat of your eye

Falling rain

Member Elite

since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

5 posted 2008-02-19 08:38 AM

oh thanks god! well i hope she gets the help she needs and thank you for being there for her support.

~Zach~

Mystress May
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since 2007-10-25

Posts 296
Taunton, MA

6 posted 2008-02-20 11:45 PM

Well doll.... I love it! The rhythm is great, the subject matter is intense. Heartbreaking and powerful!

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