Dark Poetry #4 |
No one likes him... |
Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
No one sits with him He doesnt fit in But we feel like we do When u make fun of him But you go along Cuz his pain is the price paid for you to belong Its not like you hate him or want him to die but maybe he goes home and thinks suicide Maybe he'll come back to school With a gun at his side And a kindness from you might of save his life ------------------------------------------------ I was just writing. I would never think suicidel thoughts. this is just writing so dont think bad of me.. ~Zach~ |
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Fareed Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75 |
It reminds me of a poem titled "Jimmy" about a kid who killed himself. |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Zach This is so sad..time to climb down from the fence & stand beside Him, let Him see He is not alone. Let the showoffs and bullies aim at the 2 of you. Take care not to put yourself at risk but make a stand before He doe's something stupid and you are left to torture yourself because you had a chance to make a difference and did nothing..... " Everybody has the choice, to turn their back or raise their voice " Regards John |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
umm john this never happened. wait i mean i dont have a friend who is like this, just i thought about something that people tend to ignore |
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I am the arch angel Member
since 2008-02-02
Posts 167nowhere,illinois,USA |
what about me im bullied. i havent thought about the whole thing totaly but i am sort of descirbed in this poem....yeah this is some deep thoughts tho |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
You know those are the exact lyrics to a Superchick song. It's called Hero FoReVeR.BrOkEn |
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hiddensmiles Senior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 514at the beach... i wish |
Yes forever broken your exactly right. I already reported this poem once as innappropriate content and it was deleted...apparently he doesn't seem to catch to the concept of original material. Beginning to get a bit annoying. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
oh im srry i didnt know this was a song (honestly!!). i must of heard of this song a long time ago and must of remembered the lyric's. I'm so srry i didnt mean to be copywriting!! i wish the monerators can just cancel/erase this cuz i feel really bad about this. im so srry!! please forgive me... |
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Mystress May Member
since 2007-10-25
Posts 296Taunton, MA |
Zach.... you have hit upon a subject that many people ignore. I enjoyed this poem and I have seen too many of these souls destroyed by ignorance. |
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