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0 posted 2008-02-11 08:44 PM


No one sits with him
He doesnt fit in
But we feel like we do
When u make fun of him

But you go along
Cuz his pain is the price
paid for you to belong

Its not like you hate him
or want him to die
but maybe he goes home
and thinks suicide

Maybe he'll come back to school
With a gun at his side
And a kindness from you might of save his life


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I was just writing. I would never think suicidel thoughts. this is just writing so dont think bad of me..

~Zach~

© Copyright 2008 Zach Booker-Scott - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-02-12 04:46 AM


It reminds me of a poem titled "Jimmy" about a kid who killed himself.
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2 posted 2008-02-12 06:24 AM


Zach

This is so sad..time to climb down from the fence & stand beside Him, let Him see He is not alone. Let the showoffs and bullies aim at the 2 of you. Take care not to put yourself at risk but make a stand before He doe's something stupid and you are left to torture yourself because you had a chance to make a difference and did nothing.....

" Everybody has the choice, to turn their back or raise their voice "

Regards

John

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3 posted 2008-02-12 06:09 PM


umm john this never happened. wait i mean i dont have a friend who is like this, just i thought about something that people tend to ignore
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4 posted 2008-02-12 10:07 PM


what about me im bullied. i havent thought about the whole thing totaly but i am sort of descirbed in this poem....yeah this is some deep thoughts tho

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5 posted 2008-02-13 05:15 PM


You know those are the exact lyrics to a Superchick song. It's called Hero

FoReVeR.BrOkEn

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6 posted 2008-02-13 06:59 PM


Yes forever broken your exactly right.  I already reported this poem once as innappropriate content and it was deleted...apparently he doesn't seem to catch to the concept of original material.  Beginning to get a bit annoying.
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7 posted 2008-02-14 08:07 PM


oh im srry i didnt know this was a song (honestly!!). i must of heard of this song a long time ago and must of remembered the lyric's. I'm so srry i didnt mean to be copywriting!! i wish the monerators can just cancel/erase this cuz i feel really bad about this. im so srry!! please forgive me...
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8 posted 2008-02-20 11:51 PM


Zach.... you have hit upon a subject that many people ignore. I enjoyed this poem and I have seen too many of these souls destroyed by ignorance.
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