Dark Poetry #4 |
Gone and Forgotten |
Kitherion Member
since 2006-08-01
Posts 181Johannesburg |
Gone and Forgotten Alone in the darkness, Unaccompanied in the silence, Forgotten by the world, Gone from the light. So he fell, Great glorious splendor lost, Fouled by pride, Sustained by revenge. But still he sits, Alone in the darkness, Unaccompanied in the silence, Forgotten by the world, Gone from the light. “But lo! See this, These women are the fruit of the land, Why then should we not eat?” And now he sits, Accompanied in the darkness, Followed in the silence, Revieved by the world, Creating Darkness. In the Great War, the splendor Of battle shall be seen. He shall once again be in light, In blinding brilliance, unparalleled splendor, Until all shall sit, Alone in the darkness, Unaccompanied in the silence, Forgotten by God, Gone from the light. |
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Rottiestyl Member
since 2007-04-19
Posts 60Illinois, USA |
Like peeking in to an empty dark room from behind a black curtain.Very solemn but potent piece. |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
This is very good, very open. this i loved. KEEP ON |
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MannyNelemi New Member
since 2007-04-27
Posts 9Houston |
indeed dark...i like! |
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