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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Trying so hard to cover the red, so nobody knows how many times i've bled, now I see everyday, doing this is not ok, Everyone around me looks so sad, I never thought it could turn out this bad, even though I know it's killing you all inside, you'd die if you knew about the cuts & what I try to hide, Now I sit here not knowing what to do, life's been so tough ever since I met you, the moster the drug I can't help but hate, but I can't stop using, help came too late. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ [This message has been edited by hunnie_girl (04-17-2007 01:53 PM).] |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Edit the 4th and 6th. Other than that, it was a very good poem. I especially liked the endiing "help came too late" that was so cool. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Thanx for your reply. I fixed up what you said... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Hi hunnie! I soo luved this! Awesome as always  Luv Kira ~Should the truth be so buried |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
This is so full of feeling like all of yours. I love all of what you put down on here KEEP ON |
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