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cherrys_rule
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since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2007-04-08 09:24 PM

By Courtney A

I look around
I see people all happy and giddy
But do you think if they looked around
they would think that's a pitty.
People are so stupid today,
All they they want is to get their way.
I feel bad for rich people,
they don't know anything about life.
My kind of people have to work 24 hours.
Some people even end up at the end of the day
within their hand a knife.
Most people don't have time to look around,
and see people crawling on the ground.
Some people just call their honey,
just to ask if they can spend some money.
But do you see when we get to heaven,
we won't need any money or jewelry, or a nice fancy car, or a anything from them!
All we need is love for Him!

Twilight Warrior
Member

since 2007-02-22

Posts 106
The World That Never Was

1 posted 2007-04-11 05:39 AM

I feel bad for rich people,
they don't know anything about life.
My kind of people have to work 24 hours.
Some people even end up at the end of the day within their hand a knife.

This is a very good poem, I actually had an idea for a similar one, but haven't got around to it yet. Nice Work.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2007-04-15 12:33 PM

Wow! This poem really makes you think. You did a really awesome job!

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2007-04-15 09:52 AM

Thanks you guys. I was very much in the mood for writing this at the time.Have you ever just looked around and just took pitty on everything? I don't think God had the Intention of us being so greedy with everything we have, but the thing is... He's the one that gave it all to us. At the end we'll have everything that we ever wanted anyways. So WHY are people so greedy now over something that they'll have later on in life?

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-04-19 12:56 PM

People are so stupid today,
All they they want is to get their way.~

How very true. couldn't have put it into better words. very nice write...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

mged
Junior Member

since 2007-03-29

Posts 39
ND

5 posted 2007-04-26 10:28 AM

I agree with hunnie people are so dumb to day only trying to get on.
VERY GOOD
WANT TO READ MORE

MannyNelemi
New Member

since 2007-04-27

Posts 9
Houston

6 posted 2007-04-27 11:58 AM

"I feel bad for rich people,
they don't know anything about life." i like this part ...i like this poem! gud job

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