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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
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Closer to Hell...

0 posted 2007-03-22 04:29 PM



Simple is not my life
Wish I couldn’t tell wrong from right
Sadness takes me down
It’s true now I only wear a frown
I’m tearstained
With al little blood
Tear stained
Sinking in the mud
Drowning with all my sorrow
Wish I didn’t have to see tomorrow
Cause it’s tearstained
Today is just another in a long line of days
And they go by and I stand here dazed
Trying to forget but I know better
I sit in the dark reading old love letters
And remember how it was
When I was younger and could not see
How cold and cruel this world could be
Cause it’s tearstained
With a little blood
It’s tear stained
Sinking in the mud
Drowning with everyone’s sorrow’s
Wish there didn’t have to be a tomorrow
Cause it’s tearstained
Wish I wasn’t so cold now
Can’t say when or how I changed
Whether or not for the better I don’t know
But I’m tear stained
With a little blood...



~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

© Copyright 2007 Kira Aso - All Rights Reserved
Twilight Warrior
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since 2007-02-22
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The World That Never Was
1 posted 2007-03-22 05:36 PM


Man I love this poem. Good work Kira.

"One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came"

Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
2 posted 2007-03-23 08:42 AM



Thankyou muchies! I'm very glad you liked it.

~Should the truth be so buried
in the endless cemetery of broken dreams?~

hunnie_girl
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3 posted 2007-03-27 12:38 PM


Awe Kira this made me want to cry, this was so sad and yet, I know exactly what you are saying. I love this...
love from hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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