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Life's Up's and Downs
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Life's Up's and Downs |
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Fairplay Member
since 2007-01-15
Posts 222England |
Wot RU Sayin Mate Is Life a pain in the Harris Today the sun came out Not that it came to stay But like her smile Just for a while It brightened up my day Not that I mind the rain Except when it won’t stop Then like her frown It drags me down Or am I just a clot? Man should stand-alone? Sure that’s a simple plan No charge No cost Nought to be lost Then try it if you can Just like left from right No need to make a fuss But I still need the wife Fact is she’s half my life More often she’s a Plus Pain never hurt me bad Without it there’s no gain But up your bum Would be no fun I'd rather sun and rain Life even when it's tricky Still shared with the wife So in Cockney Rhyme I’m ending this Line Praise be to me Struggle and Strife Eric Davies [This message has been edited by Fairplay (03-27-2007 09:03 PM).] |
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Sweetpali08 Junior Member
since 2006-05-07
Posts 40 |
I like it but some words sounded kinda forced. Good jobb... |
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