Dark Poetry #4 |
Night Walk Home |
Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Night Walk Home Walking all alone on the dark streets Counting the minutes and my heartbeats Crossing under the floodlights and than into the night Annoyed at my fearfulness and my lack of sight Having an over active imagination can be a curse Listening quietly and instinctively clutching my purse A crunching of leaves I stop and I freeze Thinking that I hear someone chuckle onto the breeze I walk faster now, without looking back All this is going to give me a heart attack Home is just around the corner and on the right I promise myself I’ll throw away every one of my thrillers on sight! Almost there soon I’ll be inside Walking up to my door I let out a sigh “Nothing to be scared of !” I say out loud Any other women would have been proud I walk in and heavily lean against the door That’s the last time I walk home that’s for sure! A soft laugh comes from behind and I slowly turn around Meeting the eyes of a stranger with no time to make a sound ~I did this last halloween after walking two miles home through a creepy little park and some back roads. Had the most terrible feeling someone was following me...This is what came out of that freako experience~ |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Wow this was good really halloweeny but it's kinda far away still..... hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Me knows...Can't wait for fall and it's not even summer yet. (I have problems LOL)It wasn't really for halloween just wanted to see what everybody thought about it. Luv you lots and lots hunnie! ~Should the truth be so buried |
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Twilight Warrior Member
since 2007-02-22
Posts 106The World That Never Was |
Never thought about strangers when I walked home at night, i'm a pretty big guy. But....being an active Stephen King reader I get afraid of everything else. Paranoia extreme. Excellent poem. "One last drink and the bottle breaks, returning us to the dust from whence we came" |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thank you very much Twilight Warrior. I love to read Stephen King as well (I would also be less paranoid if I didn't read his awesome books!) Happy you enjoyed! Lots of Luv Kira ~Should the truth be so buried |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhhhh I love Stephen King he is amazing.... I like Misery the best. |
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mged Junior Member
since 2007-03-29
Posts 39ND |
This was very good i liked it alot |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia |
This is great.. I've always been a big fan of your work and this doesn't let your reputation down... |
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ManOfWolves28 Member
since 2005-12-21
Posts 83 |
There's something interesting about walking through the dark. I haven't yet figured out what it truely is yet. Guess Im like the moth of whom only flys toward the light do attempt finding the darkest point beyond. Great poem |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Me too hunnie! (I'm listening to the tape right now) Kind of scary to listen to in the dark... ~Should the truth be so buried |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Hello mged! I'm glad that you liked it! ~Should the truth be so buried |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thank you RevengelsMine. I really am very happy that you enjoyed this poem and maybe a few others too. (I'm a big fan of your work as well) Hope to see more from you! ~Should the truth be so buried |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thank you very much ManOfWolves! ~Should the truth be so buried |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
brought back memories of my younger years when I had to walk past a corner of hedges in the dark to get home after babysitting for a cousin... all the night sounds seemed louder and more frightening~~ M |
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dwgpoet Member
since 2007-03-05
Posts 122FL, USA |
Makes me want to try an optomistic reply and try my own poem about walking at night home Soon, One I'll jumble "When undotted i's stumble" |
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alibaster Member
since 2001-07-07
Posts 299In my own private hell...(PA). |
Nice read for my morning coffee!! Until...alibaster †The Divine Sinner† |
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infralie New Member
since 2007-04-24
Posts 5Oklahoma, USA |
wow awesome haha |
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