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cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

0 posted 2006-09-18 03:56 PM

I said I loved you
but you wouldn't listen through.
All you worried about was all the lies,
which weren't even a little bit true.
All we did was watch time go by,
not even a minute we spent together.
Come on NOW!, we were boyfriend and girlfriend.
We could of done something to make our relationship a little better.
But now it's gone forever.
You can't do anything to make it worse.
It's gone, out the window, it went adois.
You can't get my love back.
Love was something that you lacked.It wasn't my fault I had to break us up.
It's something you will never understand,
or you jst one thing, you couldn't mend.
But why am I still complaining when you did all the blaming?
I'm over all of it.
I loved you and this is
what you had put me through

[This message has been edited by Masked Intruder (09-18-2006 04:43 PM).]

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2006-09-19 12:23 PM

Hi cherrys_rule,

Umm... Not quite sure what to make of the poem yet. It appears to be a little bit of a rant? I'm going to have to go read it again...

BTW- Nice to see you again, it's been awhile. Thanks for posting!

"I pray thee, O God, that I
may be beautiful within."
–Socrates
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lanaia74
Member

since 2006-08-25

Posts 67

2 posted 2006-09-19 06:28 AM

I thought this was well done!

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

3 posted 2006-09-19 03:37 PM

Thanks you guys, and yes it has been a long time since I have been on this. sorry bout that.

secret_truth_lies
Member

since 2006-11-14

Posts 74

4 posted 2006-12-29 08:51 PM

I thought you did a great job, I better see more from you soon.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

5 posted 2007-02-13 11:02 PM

if you are over it then why the poem? I know that writing helps...so WRITE ON!!!!

~~~kingsangel~~~

cherrys_rule
Member

since 2006-03-18

Posts 442

6 posted 2007-04-24 07:41 PM

um well long story, but i'll cut it short. I broke up with him, and he came crawling back. So I told him off. and that poem mostly came from my anger. So if you only understood what i went through you would probably feel the same as i did.

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