Anchored Upon The Taste Of Her

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Dark Poetry #4

Anchored Upon The Taste Of Her

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

0 posted 2007-03-04 05:26 PM

Always lost within my head
  succumed to this lost sense of self
still unable to undo this knot in my chest         tied into a hollowness
    where sounds of love are echoes
and nothing more
   Everything still so empty
still so confused
   a burnt taste that never leaves my mouth
      feeling condemed    without you
every song      every emotion
   leaves me yearning for outstretched arms
but anchored down     unable to move on
    unable to love so passionately again...

"Pain! With out love, Pain, I can't get enough, Pain,I like it rough cuz i'd rather feel pain than nothing at all" - 'Pain' Three Days Grace

butterflylp
Junior Member

since 2007-02-27

Posts 11
ky,usa

1 posted 2007-03-05 12:14 PM

This poem was deep. I could really feel the emotion of it. Can't wait to read more.

SATURN
Member

since 2004-05-04

Posts 78
ok,us

2 posted 2007-03-07 01:21 AM

very strong emotion loved it.

Tomer
Senior Member

since 2002-06-28

Posts 1168
Michigan

3 posted 2007-03-08 11:38 AM

Really liked it. I like the unique way you formatted it too. Nicely done.

Kaos
Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 317
between space and time

4 posted 2007-03-12 05:24 PM

thanks for the comments all. It's always nice to hear feed back of any kind.

Thank you all

"Pain! With out love, Pain, I can't get enough, Pain,I like it rough cuz i'd rather feel pain than nothing at all" - 'Pain' Three Days Grace

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