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Abbeon
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Curiousity, and wonder

0 posted 2007-01-26 04:28 PM



The Path To Fears Door

Deep within my hidden garden past the forest strong and free.

Across the babbling broke there is a mountain, a place sacred to me.

The trail that leads to the summit, is filled with many twists and turns.

False paths and false hope spring up beneath our feet.

Luring us to a false senses of security, only to deposit us at fears door.

The one true path is our destination.

To the mountain I will be your guide.

Along the path are many shadows.

Twisted, tall, and dark as death its self.

To take a step off of the path is to step into the trap.

The shadows hunger for the taste of blood.

As they fear the light that is to take them.

To lead the shadows to a place…

To where they will dwell in peace.

The path turns to the right be careful not to stumble.

Alongthe path we shall travel to the cliffs edge.

Travailing to the mountain to climb to the sanctuary…

To find fears door…

I will lead you there.

© Copyright 2007 Rebecca Mackie - All Rights Reserved
Abbeon
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1 posted 2007-01-26 04:33 PM


I have one or two more that follows this they are called fears door and fears choice please tell me what you think of them

Thank you for your poems and you thoughts

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-01-27 09:25 PM


ahhhhh I liked it I think there are many thought in this poem.
~Luring us to a false senses of security, only to deposit us at fears door.~
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Kira Aso
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3 posted 2007-01-31 12:25 PM



Oh, I like it too! Have to agree with hunnie there was definately alot of thought here.

~Along the path are many shadows. Twisted, tall, and dark as death its self.~

Awesome!
Love Kira

Idontmindyouundermyskin
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4 posted 2007-01-31 04:58 PM


Very good write! Good use of imagery, really sucked me in.

I'll be sure to check out your other two when i have time.

lovergurl
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5 posted 2007-05-26 03:01 PM


wow. you can really write!!! this was a really, really good one. I love the choice of words you used. it was great!! keep them coming, and I'll be sure to comment.

Becca.

Abbeon
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6 posted 2007-05-28 08:29 PM


thanks its been along time coming but the other two are almost... well there almost.
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