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The path To Fears Door
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The path To Fears Door |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
The Path To Fears Door Deep within my hidden garden past the forest strong and free. Across the babbling broke there is a mountain, a place sacred to me. The trail that leads to the summit, is filled with many twists and turns. False paths and false hope spring up beneath our feet. Luring us to a false senses of security, only to deposit us at fears door. The one true path is our destination. To the mountain I will be your guide. Along the path are many shadows. Twisted, tall, and dark as death its self. To take a step off of the path is to step into the trap. The shadows hunger for the taste of blood. As they fear the light that is to take them. To lead the shadows to a place… To where they will dwell in peace. The path turns to the right be careful not to stumble. Alongthe path we shall travel to the cliffs edge. Travailing to the mountain to climb to the sanctuary… To find fears door… I will lead you there. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
I have one or two more that follows this they are called fears door and fears choice please tell me what you think of them Thank you for your poems and you thoughts |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ahhhhh I liked it I think there are many thought in this poem. ~Luring us to a false senses of security, only to deposit us at fears door.~ hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Oh, I like it too! Have to agree with hunnie there was definately alot of thought here. ~Along the path are many shadows. Twisted, tall, and dark as death its self.~ Awesome! Love Kira |
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Idontmindyouundermyskin Junior Member
since 2007-01-29
Posts 32 |
Very good write! Good use of imagery, really sucked me in. I'll be sure to check out your other two when i have time. |
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lovergurl Member
since 2007-05-08
Posts 59va |
wow. you can really write!!! this was a really, really good one. I love the choice of words you used. it was great!! keep them coming, and I'll be sure to comment. Becca. |
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Abbeon Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228Curiousity, and wonder |
thanks its been along time coming but the other two are almost... well there almost. |
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