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silhouetted
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since 2004-01-30
Posts 537
New Zealand

0 posted 2007-01-25 09:42 PM



i cannot sleep
mind buzzing
pillow engulfing
my entire sane world
spinning

its you who i see
when i try to close my eyes
eyes alight
drowned in forced ecstasy
a poison you consume
to imitate freedom

you've taken me in
pulled me under
let the madness seep into my skin
as you knew it would
oh, how it did
oh, how good it feels

it all looked so real
in my head
but with my eyes closed
i see what i had missed
when they were wide open
the cold, temporary fakeness of it

and so i can't sleep
and i can't think from the intrusion inside my head
and when even this bed offers no comfort
my entire sane world
keeps spinning

as long as we laugh out loud, laugh like we're mad. because this crazy, mixed up beauty is all that we have.

© Copyright 2007 L - All Rights Reserved
Abbeon
Member
since 2006-11-30
Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder
1 posted 2007-01-26 04:00 PM


that was really truthfull outstannding i loved it.
Thanks Abbeon

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