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Walter Poe
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0 posted 2007-01-25 05:33 AM



I saw the ghost on the stairs
I forgot, you forgot, you were never there.

A space where you never sat

A warmth for hearts you never had.

You weren't with me

I almost thought

You stood beside

But now are gone

So all that leaves is the ghost i felt
Of the time before you left
Before Before the time i forgot,
You Forgot you were never here.

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

© Copyright 2007 Paul Weatherstone - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-01-25 11:36 PM


Paul, you amaze me more everyday. this poem had me reading on. my fav part was the beginning...
~I saw the ghost on the stairs
I forgot, you forgot, you were never there.~
Very gripping
yours,
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Abbeon
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2 posted 2007-01-26 03:57 PM


that was amazing i hope to read more

:Abbeon

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