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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Close my eyes and hold back a shudder Walk through the cold and silently mutter Holding back the pain that jabs me deep inside Doing all I can to keep back the raging tide The freezing wind numbs my body but not my mind This life I’ve been living has not been kind Trying to hide the red lines that cover my arms Going through the motions and living with the harms No one notices cause no one wants to see All of the hurting going on inside of me I can deal with the frigid winter as it tears me apart But I can’t deal with this pain that’s tearing out my heart |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Really really good, Kira! Gut wrenching, the pain really tears. Loved it! Sylvia. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thanx Sylvia! I'm so happy you liked!!! Some times when emotions go nutso and I feel so amazingly alone this is how I find myself feeling. It's funny how we can hurt so much but not really be in any physical pain at all. Thanx again! Luv Kira |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Kira this was beautiful... ~Trying to hide the red lines that cover my arms Going through the motions and living with the harms No one notices cause no one wants to see All of the hurting going on inside of me I can deal with the frigid winter as it tears me apart But I can’t deal with this pain that’s tearing out my heart~ This part was the best it was like looking in the mirror man, amazing. ohhhh I loved this... luv hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
I'm sooo happy you liked it hunnie!!! I've been kinda outa wack lately (I've had so much going on!) This poem says what I can't say. I'm hurting plain and simple and yet there seems no way to make the hurting stop. (You think there's a pill for this too?) Luv you lots hunnie! Kira |
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Idontmindyouundermyskin Junior Member
since 2007-01-29
Posts 32 |
Nice Write girl. Hunnie already said what the best part is so there is no need for me to be redundant. But really good write nonetheless. |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Thankyou much! |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
A pill for this for huting there is but... I don't really think pills work for this Time heals all wounds, good luck though Kira... Luv, hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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