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An End
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An End |
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tecoyah Member
since 2003-11-16
Posts 83NY |
An End The toil and labor, years Creating failure in relationship A just reward is due for the effort Just in the eyes of an unknown God Emotion breeds pain for all but the avatar Who has no need of it Would life be a worthy journey If not for such inescapable drama The task of going on, is in itself Entertainment enough for young souls What of those who crave more Mind over matters What light you use, defines the bottom of the hole |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
There is no for gone conclusion about an end. The end is always being rewritten. what we may think may or may not play out the way we think. |
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Sparticus Member
since 2003-11-15
Posts 245 |
Very bare bones and strong piece...there could be more fleshing out by using some visuals that support your feeling. Sparticus. Even with insects- |
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