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Desolation. |
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bgryan Junior Member
since 2003-06-16
Posts 30North Ireland |
Lightning struck Thunder roared a mighty voice Everywhere upon the earth In every corner life stood still. Tears fell from heaven Up through the ground Came a trembling sound Shook my heart made me cry God in anger I don’t want to die. Not a movement did I feel Then my aura disappeared Fleeing fast across the sky She waved to me,said goodbye. I stood alone and held my breath As the land was covered By the seal of hell. Recalling visions Before the storm How the light gave us warmth With a tender heart full of love Memories of a white winged dove. Now it’s over and you can see What it’s like to die in misery With no friend around To kiss your name As you are gently Lower into the ground. |
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River Senior Member
since 2003-09-16
Posts 627my own little world |
this is very sad and dark. i liked your rhyme here, it looks very well planned and thought out. good job =) - River Love hurts as bad as it feels good. |
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Brad Majors 
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
The end of love and eartly death can feel one and the same. Did you mean lowered? |
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