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sgreybe
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since 2000-04-28
Posts 209
London, UK
0 posted 2007-01-10 06:58 AM

EBBING LIFE:

The lost can find and the blind can see
But the weight of the world
Can't be lifted from me

For my life of hope is now a life of pain
And the cycle of hell
Starts around again

Exhaustion strips what life was here
From inner self
Rises only fear

One by one my resources fail
Left behind
A ghostly trail

To leave me here, the world moves on
Alone I remain
Ebbing life gone.


**Sylvia 10/01/07**
© Copyright 2007 Sylvia Greybe - All Rights Reserved
hunnie_girl
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1 posted 2007-01-10 10:52 PM

I liked thia it had an amazing flow and the words were easy to read... nice
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~
Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
2 posted 2007-01-11 02:49 AM


I have to agree with hunnie on this one. Very nice indeed!

Luved it lots!!!
Luv Kira
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