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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Insane hunnie Day in day out another fight, This one lasted well into the night, You always blame me even though it's him, My pride still stays but my spirits dim, I can't get back the love I lost, You all can't see how much this has cost, If I stay here with all this pain, I might just go insane. ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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sgreybe Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 209London, UK |
Great poem Hunnie! Sylvia |
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morbid Junior Member
since 2007-01-05
Posts 22Arkansas USA |
 sad "My pride still stays but my spirits dim," i like that line though |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ummm thanks... hunnie  ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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Kira Aso Member
since 2006-09-26
Posts 351Closer to Hell... |
Oh hunnie this was so sad! (sniffs) I luved every part and it had such an impact on me. You're poetry is loved and very much appreciated hunnie. Hugs and Hershey bars are being sent your way! Luv Kira |
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Sarka Junior Member
since 2006-09-21
Posts 23Canada |
Excellent poem!!! I really liked that you still have strength "My pride still stays but my spirits dim" I hope your spirts will rise soon. ~If we didn't have any bad days, we wouldn't appreciate the good ones~ |
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