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hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2007-01-09 10:26 PM

When It Began
hunnie

Here take my hand,
Let your dreams turn to sand......

Ashes to ashes, dust to dust,
If you go with him, death is a must,

He'll turn you around, make you want to end this strife,
The awful this we all call life,

Maybe you'll survive with only red slits,
Maybe you'll get high to get out of the pits,

Depression is a hard thing to go through,
I've been there done that, now I'm telling you,

I took his hand,
And that's how it began

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

click1
Member

since 2003-03-25

Posts 152
usa

1 posted 2007-01-10 10:55 PM

Wow...very deep! I caught a glimpse..

Click

Kira Aso
Member

since 2006-09-26

Posts 351
Closer to Hell...

2 posted 2007-01-11 01:50 AM

You always make your poems flow so perfectly! Deep indeed.

Such a great job you did!!!

Lots of luff
Kira

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

3 posted 2007-01-12 09:40 PM

awe thanks Kira and click

...
luv you guys...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

4 posted 2007-01-15 07:30 AM

see no bad poems anywhere in sight.

From dawn of day to dead of night

those crucial words

those wasted dreams

Always crawling from poets streams

Deep down there where we reside

So obviously it was only He

Not the words that died

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

5 posted 2007-01-15 11:51 PM

awe thanks walter it's so good to hear from you always

...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

arthur
Senior Member

since 2001-08-14

Posts 678
england

6 posted 2007-01-17 10:09 AM

you have to fight depression hunnie

recognise it before it pounces and gets you by the throat

arthur

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

7 posted 2007-01-18 01:02 AM

Thank-you Mike I really think It is getting better

...
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

Walter Poe
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 787

8 posted 2007-01-20 10:49 AM

adding to library

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

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