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A Beautiful Disaster
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0 posted 2007-01-13 11:50 AM


Letting Go

You're still the song that sounds in my soul,
You're still a dream, so far, no longer real,
Me, love and you... Three halves of something whole,
If one is missing, everything is clear.
You can't recall my warm and loving glance,
I can't recall your glare, full of anger,
And... turn away; love left me no chance
To be your sweetest sin or perfect stranger.

I loved my own pain
When you could be a shield,
I seemed to be so weak,
Still not ashamed of it...
I was so weak, yet was so strong,
Like pretty rose that has its thorns,
And now these thorns are all
That's left of me...

In darkest corners of my soul
Alive are memories, so sweet.
Can't be with you, can't be alone,
Cant bear my truth or your deceit.
Each of your words I'll always treasure,
But won't response - I have my pride
And quell this love that can't be measured,
I can't afford to lose this strife.

You'll always be with me,
But only... in my thoughts.

I loved my own pain
When you could be a shield,
I seemed to be so weak,
Still not ashamed of it...
I was so weak, yet was so strong,
Like pretty rose that has its thorns,
And now these thorns are all
That's left of me...


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1 posted 2007-01-14 10:15 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS I HOPE YOU LIKE IT HERE AS MUCH AS I DI . I REALLY LIKED THIS IT HAS A BEAUTIFUL FLOW...
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2 posted 2007-01-16 07:55 AM


Thanks, hunnie!
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3 posted 2007-01-17 05:09 AM


ohhh... I love this line! "Cant bear my truth or your deceit"

I'm looking forward to reading more of your words. :-)

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4 posted 2007-01-19 02:45 AM


Thank you, I'll post more soon!
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5 posted 2007-01-19 09:50 PM


Welcome to Passions!

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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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6 posted 2007-01-20 11:14 AM


Aww thanks a lot for the greeting!
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