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Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
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Closer to Hell...
0 posted 2007-01-01 10:21 AM


Home at last to those I love
Thanking sweet God up above
Holding them close I don’t want to let go
Feel like I’ll lose sight of them in the snow
Everyone merry with faces warm and bright
A happy family is truly a beautiful sight
I didn’t think I’dmake it to see them again
So all I can say is thank you God and Amen!

© Copyright 2007 Kira Aso - All Rights Reserved
click1
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since 2003-03-25
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1 posted 2007-01-04 02:42 AM

not really "Dark".. but I see the "lIGHT"....gOOD rhyme..it flowed well..

Click
Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 351
Closer to Hell...
2 posted 2007-01-04 03:04 PM

Thanx! Yeah, i know it's not "dark". (Dumb me!!!) Thankyou for the nice comment anyway!!

Kira
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